Editing is complete, check out early proofs for print!

As of today @ 3:26PM central, Matthew Pook completed his edits for ZWEIHÄNDER! zweihander grimandperilous.com warhammer fantasy roleplay retroclone He managed to cut out a lot of the redundancy, eliminated the more confusing elements and massively swept out font errors, typos and removed excessive use of semicolons. We also backed in many of the errors the community caught, and updated several rules in the book that were confusing. We are so incredibly lucky to have him onboard to bring ZWEIHÄNDER to market!

In the meanwhile, take a look at a few snapshots from our early proof of chapters 1-3. Dejan and our Mother of Dragons Milena have been working hard to whip this book into shape, and it shows. Note that we still have a long way to go, as we’re still working on font sizing, image nudging, borders and other technical changes for print. Check it out over at Kickstarter!

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